Friday, February 24, 2012

Not the End



His spirit hovered over his broken bones and bleeding body. She had pushed him off the cliff in her frustration, and he was finished.

The oversoul memory, inaccessible during life, returned to him now. He recalled how, in a previous scenario eons ago, he had harmed her.

Karma fulfilled. Next lifetime, they would be lovers.

If you have written a Friday Flash 55 story you would like to share, visit Galen, G-Man at Mr. Know It All (see sidebar), and let him know. Have a delicious weekend. Be desirable. Donnetta

8 comments:

Brian Miller said...

eeeep...just another reason to make sure you treat everyone nice...so it does not come back to haunt you...smiles. nice 55

Donnetta said...

Hi, Brian: Lessons learned, I suppose. Starcrossed lovers and all that! Smiles right back...D

G-Man said...

Dark Donnetta at her best!
That Karma can come back to haunt you for sure.
Loved your 55 My Friend
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

Donnetta said...

Hi, Galen: Glad I could get this one done on time! D

Charles Gramlich said...

The next lifetime sounds like it's going to be pretty good.

ivan@creativewriting.ca said...

Shades of SHE, of old Ryder Haggard, but a little reversed.

Is that what happens when you try to cast your broad upon the water?

And she does a monkey toss and throws you in? :)

Donnetta said...

Charles: Can't be as bad as the one right now! Only go up from here, looks like. D

Donnetta said...

Ivan: OOOOHHHHH. Cast your broad on the water. OOOOOHHHHH. Yep, that's what ya get! D